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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Funhouse93

    Funhouse93 Member

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  2. Sanguine

    Sanguine Senior Member

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    T looks too much like an L. The top bar looks too much like an extension while the lower bar going to the right looks too much like a part of the core letter structure. you need to define the top bar as part of the core letter structure better and add something different to the bottom to fill the negative space that doesn't look like it's part of the core letter structure.
     
  3. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Alright my ninjas, Alright, new battle. Word is:*Gone*Due:*Friday 24th
     
  4. PUTS

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    Just practicing some straights.


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  5. Funhouse93

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    Nice puts keep at it, I would personally reccomend just doing outlines of letters and skipping the drop shadow to accelerate faster on the learning curve, just get bar structure down. Others might disagree though
     
  6. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Im having a bit of trouble with my B's D's and J's and sorta my U's and S's. I just personally don't like those letters much right now for some reason. I guess I just need to practice more on them.
     
  7. Sanguine

    Sanguine Senior Member

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    I disagree because doing too much of one thing can burn you out and then progression goes stagnant. Mixing things up is refreshing and a better practice from my experience. Plus you progress in multiple areas instead of just one. Just make sure to stay in the 'ballpark' of your skill level. Don't jump the gun and try overly difficult or complicated things if you haven't even decently progressed with the basics.
     
  8. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    I personally do tags and handstyle practice one day and then straights the next. But I might get into throwies soon.
     
  9. braxtons a g

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    [​IMG]Some old stuff
     

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  10. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    I kinda like the concept of this.. I might play around with this a bit more.

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  11. PUTS

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    Its supposed to be the letter D.
     
  12. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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    The drop shadow is off, work on that
     
  13. PUTS

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    Yea but I'm going to change the letter itself so it matches the drop shadow.
     
  14. Sanguine

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    tbh I think the drop shadow actually adds some interesting flow to the letter even though it's way off. I'd say stick to perfecting the basics for now still, but don't abandon that idea, you might could execute it p well if you gain the skill first.

    Progress flick for the chatter, Probs gonna remove those little chips in the middle, not feeling em:

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  15. LimpBrain

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    One of my first attempts with fill in
     
  16. LimpBrain

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    It's my homies piece, what do u think?
     
  17. Junglizt

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    Pizza box piece. 'Mepser' I found out after I started writing this that there's a dude writing meps in america which is kind of annoying but oh well

    @puts - straights are looking pretty solid mate
    @braxtons - the silver one is looking nicest out of those. on the left side of the R I think you could lose the bit where its disrupted so it's just a straight line, or maybe keep the indent but just make it so it carries on in one line rather than stopping and starting a new line that connects to it. If you know what I mean? would make it flow a bit better
    @snaguine - looks clean and has a nice flow but I won't lie, I can't read it too well haha
    @limp - I'm liking the RZ simple bro, only thing I would say is I'm not sure about how the top of the N flares at out at the top. Might just be personal preference though.. Your mates piece has a nice colour scheme, I might have to try that one
     
  18. Agus Wibowo

    Agus Wibowo Senior Member

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    Sanguine: that's wild
    Limp: RZ: The horizontal bar of the R is way too thin. ONE: the 3 letters have 3 different style. Try to make them similar
    Limp: bout your homie's shit, what does it say?
    Junglizt: I like it
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  19. scaper

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    yeah, i cant read your friends shit either
     
  20. LimpBrain

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