@ dare 2 be different your p is unreadable your e is toofat and your k is too skinny

 

Is this acceptable for a starting throwie?

 

I kinda like it but your t looks like an r

 

Crits plz

 

fucked the fill up but still working on throw.
Any crits?

 

JOLZ, fix your L. it read JOIZ

 

Thanks scaper ill try that

 

Puts The s is a little weird but other than that it's dope

 

Whoa whoa whoa buddy. What is that? Eager to advance I see. But no. First of all...if nobody has told you before, just stick to tags for a while. Like a long while. And letter structure. Pay attention. There's a lot of crits on this forum and before you go asking questions n shit, search thru the last like 100 pages of this thread and the tags thread and every thread and compare what you're doing to what others are doing. You'll find you're asking the same questions as everyone else on here and they are already answered. Keep it up l. Don't give up. And just absorb everything about graffiti that you can

 

listen to brask and stick to hands for a while.. and when say a while, not a week and 2 notebooks while..
you dont need to even be worrying about anything much than hands and some throws down the line

 

Got bored.. how bout it? crits welcomed

 

Maybe round the top left of the s a bit. Looks good tho I like it

 

no idea what that is supposed to be

 

No think it's mostly your problem them al. What is that

 

It's not that bad, maybe needs a couple revisions.
Does it say 'sare'?

 

thanks loon

 

Crits plz

 

I'm not that experienced in throwies but i've been low key sorta studying them a bit. But I think you should round out the edges on your letters first.