Crits plz

 

Not really sure what direction to go with this crits?

 

Forget the stuff i posted above, the lines are fucked... So crits for this throwie plz

 

You've been posting the same shit asking for crits for like a month. Crit yourself it's bad. Come back when somethin looks different

 

Will do

 

@r3tched What loon said

@holy not awful man, the left side of the H looks kinda jank though. I wouldnt make the rounded part jut in as far, looks off. The Y needs some work too. Overall not bad, youre on the right path

 

Acceptable start for a throwie?

 

I kinda like that u. Try doing a small case t. The p and s still need work

 

Alright thanks.

 

@limp no idea what thats supposed to say, whatever the middle letter is doesnt resemble a letter

@puts the U is the only decent letter, the T doesnt look like a T at all and the other letters have little to no style at all. Spice it up a bit

 

It's says zmk, my first attempts with throwies

 

just try and keeping it more simple, Limp
the M and K are wonky

 

Ok Get It, thanks guys

 

Trying to get IDKWHATTODOWITHMYHANDS to come out of his dark and lonely hole and he always shows up to tell me my throwies are shit then he crawls back into his cave to strike again later...



Freal tho. Been sitting on this for a while just trying to tweak it here and there. How's this lookin? I had a little bit of shakey hand syndrome so my S's look a little whack...

 

I like the top one with the capital B

 

What about it is done right?

Also, omlet I got a dope piece in the making for you. Might not color it in case you wanted to print it up and color it yourself or something. Well...I think it's dope lol

 

Idk cant put my finger on it, just looks aestically pleasing, i fucks with it.

 

Alright I dig that. I'll keep tweaking with it and see if I can bust out some more stylistic throwies.