Hm I see what you're saying. The B does lack some flow...thanks. good looking out.

And uhm...well. it's a start. I'm not the throwie expert but there's def a lot wrong with it. Here's what I notice. Ditch the negative space in the A. Ditch the halo. Ditch the circle around the eye of the E. Just make it a line or something. Keep the tongue, looks cool. Your S is whack, not proportional in the right places and looks like it overlaps itself funky because of the way you drew that top inside curve, just make that line and the right side bulge with the same line so you lose the overlap. Your K looks alright to me cept the legs coming off the side just sorta make it looks like it has downs. And there's nothing wrong with downs people...just saying. Also this is just a personal preference, so take it how you wanna. I'm not a fan when someone puts multiple style things like your $ in the a, then the * for the b, then the • in the e. I like them all consistent so it just reads better. Some of the more advanced throwies look dope with that kinda thing but you're just not at that level yet. No offense. I ain't either. That's why you always see my throwies with the same thing in those kinda of letters. Just a straight | maybe an !

 

best crit ever

[edit]: look how simple ASEK keep his letters.. his shit my help inspire you some

 

@Brask Hahahahah I really enjoyed that crit thanks. Gonna apply all that today when I'm working on it. Appreciate it.

@Erok I like that S and K a lot.

 

atleast put another line on the left side to make it seem like a t

 

I like that. My throwies aren't all that good so what do I know. Looks dope to me

 

The A looks like a R

 

Theres no center kick on the leg of the A that would make it a R.

 

Sorry bud but it's a R doesn't resemble an A at all

 

I thought it was an R too

 

Yea it does look like R instead

 

Since everyone seems to have troubles telling the difference between my A's and R's, I added one to the end of my throw for comparison

 

Cool shit, Grabs.

 

SARE, your A and R are identical

 

Where should I look for N inspiration?

 

Thanks Bugs and Al

@alcapwn A and R are really similar, try something different with the leg of the R. As for the E, try a lowercase E theyre easier for throws IMO

@Dare The letter N or inspiration in general? It depends on the style youre wanting to be inspired by, Instagram is one of the underutilized apps for finding dope writers to learn a thing or 2 from. try looking in tags like #Throwsandtags or #Tagsandthrows

 

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffiti/freights/graffitiwriters

look through the writers with N somewhere in their name

 

One I'm working on digitally, possibly to get some slaps printed



Progress edit:

 

Dude that's dope!