Don't copy a name find your best letters and come up with something

 

Philly

Can you hit up Philly style out of Philly? I live inLA

 

Of course, but it will probably be obvious it isnt a homegrown hand

 

Can I get some crits on these hands

 

I think that bottom one is pretty cool actually. Only things I'd change are the S, see how all your letters are really top heavy and the S has a very symmetrical look to it, weighted in the center? Well I'd make the top part of your S just as big as all the rest of your letters and the bottom part smaller like all the rest. If that makes sense? And also I don't think the little bar off the tail of the E is necessary, it's not adding anything really. You could probably just drop it and your hand would look better. All in all I really like that and I may take some inspiration from the way you weighted your letters

 

Thanks man. It was hard to explain in words

 

crits? I write smok

 

I think you should change that m it almost looked like an n to me.

 

Esone: Try to give your S a more natural flow it looks too forced. Actually do that for all letters. Your making your M and K more sharper and not so rounded.

 

Quick couple of names, digging the bottom smok

 

Those are sick. You've been messing around on your phone or iPad or what?

 

On my phone, Adobe Draw, I can link it to my Illustrator account too which is cool and pull it up on my Mac at work. I don't remember if I posted this or not but here's a non graffiti related portrait I made of one of our pitbulls using the same app

 

Dope^

Ive been working on my tag some more and this is where im at crits plz

 

I think you're on to something man. I'd make all your letters the same height tho. Just my opinion. If you like the small o keep it. But that Z needs to come up a bit. And to balance the whole tag out I'd make the Z the same size as the o.

 

Thanks man ill do all that

 

I put this on black books already but it's also kind of a hand style thing so I'll toss it in here too

 

i like the skull but cant read the letters if the top is letters