yeah your proportions vary with each letter inconsistently but the lowercase looks nicer with your letters imo, ABESK

 

I'm bored of that shit though. I can make them all the same height and the same spacing. I wanna learn some new shit.

I get that's a thing in the forums that you're supposed to just keep doing basic letters but in the real world most of the shit you see is not that way. I mean, most of its not that good even.

 

well if you want people to just see a scribble on a pole, thats one thing. but a clean legible tag is best imo, then people actually read it. writers or not

 

I agree with scraper, clean and legible for the win, the more you practice it you'll naturally add your own flare too it... Shit takes time man.
Flick for talking

 

shit example but see how the proportions vary but kinda consistantly keeping the same base and height.. dont mind the fucked up A

 

Thats better Abesk, much cleaner, your letters are overlapping eachother the same amount also that makes it even cleaner! I wouldnt mind seeing that in the streets, but as you said yourself get that A fixed a lil bit, then just keep repeating, tags are all about repetion, If you try to rush style it most likely wont look any good, that shit comes with time, so keep at it.

Edit: oh that was scrapers tag hahaha, well thats the direction you wanna go in

 

Dont usually take pics of my tags but manged to find some shit that I need crits on, that oneliner wasnt anything serious just messing around in class haha. Abesk actually felt really nice to write

 

yeah i was tryna show him what i was talking about lol, thanks tho

 

This man is right.

Drop it how? Depends which handstyle im doing it switches alot, usually I do it without any shit inside it so its smooth but if I clown around with oneliner-phillystyle shit then its messy as hell but I enjoy it. Tips or explain what u ment?

 

I think he meant you should drop the little sniper scope you do in your O's.

 

Im talking about just doing regular o's

[edit]:what omlet said

 

Ye true its kinda nasty to look at.

 

Hi guys! What do you think? Could it work?

 

I think your trying to hard, I assume it says Rare? It just looks forced. Start more simple and style will come naturally.

 

Thank you!

 

Fucked the A up

 

Quick tag.. writing BLAST feels really nice for some reason.. any thoughts/crits on it?

Abesk i think the K gotta change..

 

Been gone for a bit. Thx for crits on the shitty tag I did-more welcome ps:help on flow of k?

 

Aye dats purdeh gud! The only thing I would change is the lower case t to an uppercase one. Otherwise I dig it man keep it up!