Laos: I dig the top one. Second one down is cool too, just not feeling that L personally. Echo: that shit is clean man. The only thing I'm seeing is the space between your h and o on the top is a little too wide, but other than that it looks sweet. Puts: really cool character work man, creative as hell. Herbn: personally, Im not a big digi guy. But that's pretty dope, my only thing is that z into the r kinda looks like a u at first, but that could very well just be me. Either way, looks good. So this is kinda messy, had ten minutes to kill before work and nothing but a pencil. But I kinda like how it looks. Crits?
Thanks guys, glad it's looking alright especially the tag, really been trying to put work in on making it cleaner. But anyway, I'm thinking about cleaning this one up when I have a spare minute, so I'll post that when I get to it.
Evak digging that shit. But the top piece imo has just a bit too much red for the fill haha. Experimenting. CritZ?
Kinda funny, the top is actually light orange. Really weird lighting, thats my bad XD but glad you like, nice to hear. Ill be working on my fills a bit though, even with the orange it is a bit too much i agree. Liking the overall look of that Puts, just not a huge fan of the rectangles jutting out. Letters are looking okay for the most part, id just try and make the right side of your n more like the curve on your d, or the other way around. Other than that, all i can really say is keep doing em and don't be afraid to play around. The worst thing that can happen is a letter ends up being broken and you need to try again right? teaches you more that way anyways. Just keep writing man
Did a slap with some markers I picked up today, went for a sort of old school inspired fill. Crits are welcome.
I dig everything but the V kinda looks like a C. I would take the left bar and not curve it so much. I'm bad at explaining things but hopefully you get my drift.
I like your fill probaly because I cant do a proper fill But I would listen to Puts Like everthing else though
I feel you guys, I was thinking the same. Gotta work on my v and A's more anyway, im a bit shaky with them compared to the other two. Nerfd: draw your pieces larger, its hard to be precise when you confine yourself to a small space. Other than that, just keep at it and keep it simple. Having all sharp bottoms and flat tops is showing you're starting to get what flow means. Good going on that