Thankyou. <3

 

Laos, there u go i see u developing some new stuff, improving has been done. I dont have time now to crit to much but what bugs and i think abesk said are fair advices.

Coal man u in the same boat as laos, lose xtra shit and just write normal to get style

 

Hi guys! I can't evolve my tag, can you please help me?
If someone want can write for me a few " RABE " so i can take inspiration from it?
Thank you for the attention ( sorry for my english but is not my native language)

 

something on paper.. Any crits??
These always come out sideways when phone posting..

 

I was bored, so you got lucky

 

Thank you very much! Yes, I was really lucky

 

Right, I've started about a month ago and this is where I am.
I do like the name "Lookiona", but it's too long and wouldn't be practical for throwies.
I'm more likely to pick "K454R" as my name. If the letters are too gimmicky, I'll change the numbers for letters (KASAR).
Do I need to change anything?

Also Tuke, I do like your style, but you should take off the add-ons.

 

Good shit. Go simple, take off the add-ons. Its a thing of mess.

 

Been messing around with my tags and a couple names, crits???

 

Staso, dig the eon tag. I'm not feeling your ts on the staso tags, looks forced. Go simple on the t and come back with it, it should look cleaner that way. Not bad though.

 

I have to agree with Evak your staso tag looks pretty forced. I like the A on it and thats about it, get rid of the line in the middle of your O as well.

 

Heres my progress so far

A slightly different N

 

I think the top n flows better tel. Nice job keeping it clean and simple, you're getting better at a pretty good rate now man.
Anybody up for a little exchange action?

 

What you write BT?

 

I write evak. I'm guessing you write abesk, but not let me know (I don't remember from any posts off hand)

 

Thanks man

 

Nowc I think the lower case ones ar looking good just lose the other shit

 

i was also thinking the same thanks Tel