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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Some of your bars/extensions make sense and others do not, top left of the K for example does not. The top of all the letters really. Simplify it and use less extensions
     
  2. lse292

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  3. DFEKT1

    DFEKT1 Senior Member

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  4. Ahem

    Ahem Senior Member

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    At first glance I read DTEKT..I'd extend the F's bottom bar more. It looks good though, not crazy about the bottom right leg of the K.
    I like the style and flow nonetheless. Great work.
     
  5. Koda01

    Koda01 Senior Member

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    thanks for the tip herbn.
     
  6. AMC

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  7. Koda01

    Koda01 Senior Member

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    i really like the second one man
     
  8. Koda01

    Koda01 Senior Member

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    DSC_0021.jpg added a background
     
  9. Cons

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    That's nice Koda01
     
  10. Koda01

    Koda01 Senior Member

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  11. DFEKT1

    DFEKT1 Senior Member

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    Cheer's homie.
     
  12. Tel

    Tel Senior Member

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    Trying to do connections
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  13. Nowc

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    i like that Tel
     
  14. Tel

    Tel Senior Member

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  15. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    I haven't posted anything in a bit. But can I get some critiques?

    DSCN3717.jpg DSCN3718.jpg DSCN3719.jpg
     
  16. Bt98

    Bt98 Senior Member

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    Puts, characters funny, I can dig it. Structure is looking okay, the s got a little thin at the bottom though. And on the other piece, your spacing is kinda off. other than that looking good man, keep it up.
    Apologies for the lack of activity, classes and work are eating most of my free time. I've been working on shit, I'll post stuff when I get the chance.
     
  17. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Ey thanks man.
     
  18. Bt98

    Bt98 Senior Member

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    Quick one before I crash. Crits welcome
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  19. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    I like the concept of it. But I would take that connection from the K and the E and get rid of it. It looks kind of weird.
     
  20. Bt98

    Bt98 Senior Member

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    Alright, thanks for the crits puts