Straight letter's. Crits welcome.

 

The d doesn't really look right to me. I think there's too much space between it and the f compared to the spending between the rest of the letters. That, and the right arm of the t is a bit thin, but that's nitpicking. Clean shit though dfekt, I like your style

 

You have the right idea with the capital extension spread that across

 

Hyper, what are you talking about

And to who o.o

 

Just want some crits X) the camera quality is kinda bad so you cant see the green fade but whatever

 

I would move your a out from behind the d a bit, half of that a is covered up.

 

yeeee ik i should've got the proportions better, but overall i don't think it's a shitty sketch x) thank you

 

Nah, it isn't shitty. Just room for improvement, but that's everybody's sketches all the time at every skill level XD

 

I'm actually very motivated to get better at this x) definetly a lot of room for improvement

 

Lose the arrows, their forced and don't make sense, especially the one on the D, there is not a natural bar or extension there, and the D kinda looks like a pregnant straight line lol

 

yeah man, all those arrows are a little much. im digging the pink slimy bubble shit though. and your 3D is a cool style, but inconsistent. you start the 3d off on the right side and on the D and A its on the left side.

 

i dig the fire hydrant, man. you should make it vomiting though instead of sneezing haha. digging the style on the DEVOK straight letter too. just close up that gap and you've got something wall worthy

 

Thanks man!

 

Idk whether to put this here or in walls. Got no paint, but (don't judge me XD) had tons of leftover chalk from an old board we got rid of a while ago and wanted to try it out for shits. Upped the exposure and contrast on the flick cuz it's hard to see since it's chalk, but I'll include the unedited pic as well. Crits welcome as always.

 

"life"

 

Nice keeping it simple man. Just try and make every letter have its own bars and lines, the shared borders between (for example) the I and f make the I look like negative space. Also, the bottom bar on the l the same height as on the e. that's just a consistency thing, looks cleaner that way. Other than that, just keep at it.

 

Cheer's for the crits man.

 

okok I will keep that in mind. thank you. always good to get these crits, that's how i can get better

 

First full fill and 3d since I've been writing again, I don't like the Daily overlapping the A. Crits please.