Just kept feelin' it.

 

@Dahla go simple, thats almost unreadable

 

Dahla: I like the creativity in the fills, but you really should stick to simple bar letters for now my man. Get some structure down, then you can start practicing fills. Dope colors don't make good graffiti, understanding good letter structure does. Black and white for now man XD

Also, spend some time on your tag. Post over there and we'll all help you out

 

I'm still new so need crits about letters and structure

 

The second one looks better to me, your uppercase n needs a bit more work. Nothing that can't be ironed out with practice though. Overall, not bad nowc. I like the look of it. Just hero going with it. If I were you I'd also try blocky letters, they help with structure a lot more when you're starting out.

And thanks r3tch, I'll fix that I up XD

 

Alright thanks man

 

dang man, youre progressing quic. keep at it NOWC

 

@ R3tch3d & Bt98
Thanks, I'll get some more black and white blocks down.

 

Quick one for the night.

 

Ahem, not too shabby man. Structure is looking alright to me, id just keep doing simps. Good progress on that

 

Thanks mate. Trying to do some extensions here and there, but nothing crazy..Seeing what I like and what I don't like.

 

Hey look at that. My first can. Crit on my letters¿

 

AMC: your art is fantastic, I have trouble liking the graffiti side of your art though. I think the structure needs some work imo
Kruise: can isn't bad, caps a bit small though. But I'd chill OK that kind of thing and focus on lettering for a bit. You're keeping it simple, which is good. Just use bars to draw your letters out real simple. I know it's tedious, but trust me, there isn't a single thing you can do that gets you to making dope pieces faster than that
Not that I make good pieces, anyone will tell you that's the best thing to do XD
Loon: dope as always. Shits fresh

 

almost 6 week break... I feel regres :-(

 

Been a while Laos, what's up!
I like that top one, letters look good to me. Big improvement on that a. The bottom piece is pretty cool, I like the concept of it. Only thing that bothers me with it is the bottom of the a being part of the L. It makes the L look less like a letter and more like a really weird extension of the a. Other than that I dig it. Nice to see you posting again man.

 

Pencil fills. Quickie. 'D' needs some work. Crits?

 

Laos - Way better! Progress for sure.

Muckin' around...any crits before i start outlining? Will likely kill that A extension and shift the letters up/down accordingly.