Honestly man,I see what you're trying to do but your letter structure is lacking way to much for you to attempt something like the smash picture you posted.When you dont have consistency in your letter structure and you start removing crucial angels it just looks lazy....
Ahe thanks, I'm trying to work on nice smooth lines, should I mess with the E to make it look more like the style of the C? And should my O have that same like back indent like the other letters have on the front? not sure what term to use for that.
Try it man. If it looks good then cool, if not, just try something else instead. Don't be afraid to try something, just do it XD