Honestly man,I see what you're trying to do but your letter structure is lacking way to much for you to attempt something like the smash picture you posted.When you dont have consistency in your letter structure and you start removing crucial angels it just looks lazy....

 

Crits/tips please

 

el-s-d?

 

Yeah I'm not sure what the second letter is for sure..looks good otherwise.

 

Im actually hoping it says eLSD and homies just an acid freak.

 

What do u think

 

Yup elsd and ur the first person to ever guess right lol

 

Good shit,I hope your a tripaholic man lol

 

trippin all day haha

 

good man^

 

first one liner, trying to keep it simple, crits?

 

Any crits and tips?

 

Close your n and make your the same height as all your other letters.Other then that it's not bad

 

Ahe thanks, I'm trying to work on nice smooth lines, should I mess with the E to make it look more like the style of the C? And should my O have that same like back indent like the other letters have on the front? not sure what term to use for that.

 

Try it man. If it looks good then cool, if not, just try something else instead. Don't be afraid to try something, just do it XD

 

Crits

 

the throwie's H looks like a M, you have to do another bar to make it look like an h

 

Ya I noticed that when I uploaded but thanks Koda