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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. SinsAndInk

    SinsAndInk Senior Member

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    you're comprehension of structure isn't correct.
     
  2. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Bt: no problem man
    Agus: Thats actually pretty cool i like it.
    Laos: It's kind of cool but that S seems really chunky at the bottom for some reason.
     
  3. echoV

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    tested the opacity of this black Markwell on some scrap cardboard
    the rest is Molotow 127H markers
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  4. Ahem

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    Nah yeah it is. Sorry mate.
     
  5. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    i dig it echo!
     
  6. SinsAndInk

    SinsAndInk Senior Member

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    No it's really not especially if your trying to tell me the structure in my o isn't "correct."
    W's dont have closed rounded tops.W's also dont have a bend that brings them together,they come to a point.
     
  7. SinsAndInk

    SinsAndInk Senior Member

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    Just some old shit for for talking
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  8. Bt98

    Bt98 Senior Member

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    Echo, dope man. I dig the style, my only crit is the o got kinda small
    Ahem, not trying to start beef, but sins is right. Your structure isn't founded enough to be making assertions like that. Again, I'm not trying to be a dick, but don't get a big head after one person says something positive about your work. Toy BB, nuff said
    Anyway, finished up the alphabet for the most part. Let me know what you guys think
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  9. SinsAndInk

    SinsAndInk Senior Member

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    Rite-You should follow through with your wrist when your draw lines,i see your sketching with tick marks and artistically thats a bad habit most people tend to try to draw with.It's hard to get used to at first bet it'll improve your sketching alot in no time.It's all in the wrist and elbow homie.
    Same advice as before on your letters though man,just work on bar consistency,thickness and follow through.I also think you need to scrap your I and think of a new one.
    I did a couple things today with your name in my book,i'ma post em when i finish up pie's sketch.
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    some weird shit i drew with a characoal pencil in the middle of a recent acid trip.Ik the shadings way to dark.
     
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  10. Bt98

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    Alright, I'll keep working on it man. And yeah I know, I isn't my best to XD but thanks man, appreciate it. And thanks for drawing some stuff, can't wait to see it
     
  11. No Need

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    This is a sketch for the krampus battle
    Might loose the bars coming out
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  12. PUTS

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    Bt: your stuff is actually pretty good, but the weird serif at the end of the J needs to go, and imo i feel like the E and the F are close to being cool letters but I feel like the middle bar in the E and the last bar in the F are slightly awkward.
    NoNeed: Your getting your bars down pretty well but that S needs work, and the M seems to overtake the whole piece because of the sheer size of it lol. And those connections seem weird. But otherwise your getting better!
    Sins: I like your old sketches they're pretty dope.
     
  13. No Need

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    Thanks puts ya I thought those connections were weird and my M is huge and that S is just terrible
     
  14. Bt98

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    I agree with you puts. The e and f need some more practice, and I definitely need to scrap the I like sins said. All about the practice though, it'll come with some work. Glad the simple stuff I'm doing isn't that bad though

    No Need, I'm not feeling that k, the bars on it connect too low. I would try them coming from the left bar at the same level as where the "loop" on the r connects, it'll look better and more consistent. The right bar on the a might look better if it were coming out at the same point as the bars on the r and p. And like puts said, that m is huge. Your stuff is getting better though, don't get me wrong. Just keep at it man.
     
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  15. No Need

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    Thanks Bt I'll fix that K and A really appreciate the crits
     
  16. Bt98

    Bt98 Senior Member

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    No problem man, that's what the threads for XD
     
  17. No Need

    No Need Senior Member

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    Is this what you were talking about
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  18. Bt98

    Bt98 Senior Member

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    Yeah, that looks a bit better to me.
     
  19. No Need

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  20. loonaii

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    Couple quick H0s and a 0 scale train
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