this is a repost on the first page. im toy looking for some help. heres what ive done

 

Need for infamy so no one get mad at u there's specific sections to post your throws and tags but just do keyboard letters and lose those line connections

 

fuck nvm then my bad

 

Those are dope trains Lewn

 

thx for the help

 

r those model trains

 

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread

That green box car with that silver lewn is fuego

 

Needforinfamy, there's a pretty well known writer that users the name apex, might wanna try a different name
Fucked the right leg of the a a bit but it's whatever. Just started drawing letters until it sounded like a word, crits?


And on the subject, if anyone haven't seen some of Apex's stuff, I recommend giving him a look up. Got some pretty dope shit.

 

Much better I think.

 

Ye ye man.

 

What u think?

 

Crits and tips please

 

this is for the holiday contest, I would like some crits

 

Koda - overall not too shabby, good work. The inside of the R and P (counters) don't need the purple fill, doesn't match up with the A.
K - top right leg is a little on the skinny side.
R - fine.
A - left bar is a little on the heavy side.
M - needs to be moved up as the top and bottom doesn't match up with the rest of the letters.
P - top bar is too heavy and then it gets much smaller on the end..not a bad thing to do but since you didn't do it with the other letters it's out of place, also I' don't think bending the bending bottom bar is necessary.
U - fine
S - Needs cleaning up and does the same thing as the P where it goes from skinny to thick. Not wrong to do, but since the other letters' bars stay the same width, it doesn't look right.

 

Thanks. The purple fill was actually to fix some shit i did in the P.

 

Crits please?

 

ik this is garbage, but had an idea in my head, threw it down in a few minutes. You guys think it has potential?

 

I think your letters get lost is it supposed to be EMPTY?

 

yeah, haha. Ill work on it, i think it has potential. what do i know though...