Abesk man, give up on the arrows for now. Honestly I feel like people use arrows in their pieces just for the sake of using arrows. There's pleny of incredibly dope graff that doesn't have any arrows, or even any extensions at all. Just solid clean letter structure and flow. Those are the most important things for toys to focus on. Period. Dress your pieces up all you like with arrows and do-dads but if you don't even have basic letter structure figured out then how can you ever expect to get the structure of something as complex as extensions right? Zeno is on the right track doing simpler pieces like that, albeit he's still got a long way to go. Flick for chatter:
Ha thanks but lately I've been having trouble with keeping flow consistent throughout my sketches. Aether is a hard name for me to write for sure, I just like it too much to change. Another for the chatter. These threads need more flicks.
Looks aight you're getting the bars down but you should focus on getting the bars mastered by practicing simpler letters because that S is kinda wierd lookin
@Alcapwn I noticed that all the tops of the letters tend to slant down to the right. But the P slants upwards kind of ruining the flow. I also feel like simplifying the I a bit and making the X slightly smaller may help.. Otherwise it looks pretty dope!
Sketchy With Character For Crits Pretty new to anything that isn't just tagging so i wanna sketch pieces heaps more before i go paint anymore trash throwies, so yeah tear into it, wanna know how to improve
ringo good work.the orange 3d on it is dope and the lines in it.the letters are clean and i like the holes for the letters.
Crits much welcome! Edit: Daze, you really should start copying the real deal characters, yours look like from a 3 year old tbh!
Alpha markers, but for the fill i used a cheap chrome-silver pen from pennyshop.. ill post another one soon where i try to incorporate what you told me!
People from PA saying wavy? Thought saying wavy was a Harlem thing, remember chilling w/ a rapper in harlem and he used the word. That Max B shit is mad wavy plus the dude will be out of prison soon so im stoked
Correct. Wavy is positive Looks ill why not put it in the picture gallery? Pretty sure they wont delete your piece