Preciate it bro.

@hkay
I would make the pointy add on to the H the same size as the other letters. And maybe a vertical line inside the A to help with letter form. Good start tho.

 

bruh i feel sick from the pills that i took last night im going to stay on the low low from now on i cant be doing that shit anymore the whole time i was on it i felt like i ws coming down and felt like my eye was getting so lazy it fell asleep

 

Dude I'm gonna shoot you straight. You're too young and way too immature to be on these forums. Stay in your blackbook, get better at graffiti, and come back when you're older. You're posting pictures of your face, posting other people's work, and posting random shit in the wrong threads. That goes for all 30 of your accounts.

 

Oh shit abesk just exsposed your ass.

 

First time using cans. Got a loooooong fucking way to go with can control and proportions, but better than I expected for my first go round.

Also dollar can fills can suck my ass.

 

Im a toy that wants to improve so i need criticism, just destroy me, thanks in advance

 

I'm no expert but I would try makin your letters a bit fatter and jus churn out pages of sketches dude wouldn't worry about backgrounds just concentrate on smooth lines and letter shapes ...something simple done well is better than a complex pile of shit (a decent writer told me that) your letters are nicely sized and colours are good too keep at it!!

 

Its not even a throw up though... Do round letters and keep your letters level on a baseline. Make the top of your letters the same or the bottom or both it doesn't really matter. Just look through the older pages.

 

I think what he's trying to do is piece. Just do straight letters with even bar lengths and simple shapes. Like that K at the top you started. Throw ups are something different.

 

@Abesk with some can control tips:
Move at an even speed, it will even your lines out more.
stop spraying at the corners (its hard to explain). this will stop the big blobs at the corners.
practise. tons. just lines, getting to know using a can
start at tags, the more you do the better you will get with cans in general.
heres a vid: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-C_d3hAZ_1s&t=214s

 

Thanks for the advices peeps, and yeah I just realised that what I posted earlier wasn't a throw up. I didn't really knew what throw up meant when I posted that pic, now I know. Again, ty for criticism, I will try to improve!

 

That's what's up, thanks.

Yeah dude Apps has can control for days.

 

Here you can see how big the difference is between a blackbook and going out yourself, Abesk. Personally I've never used a blackbook and just went outside and practice there. But chin up, the yellow/brown looks way better than the previous two. Also try to have your outline run over in each other some more, at several points it doesn't connect to the other lines.

 

fix ur letters before coloring it and how do you manage to smudge it off so much

 

Homies throw looks like my pack of newports

 

Cant tell whats worse to look at, the throw or the broads.