Naw man, shits wack

 

^clean, nice letter structure and balance....don't see why it's wack?

Quick sketch...still have to fix the 3d....any tips besides that?

 

Actually the 3d is onpoint, my critique would be the letters itself. Try to copy your keyboard at first, as obviously always mentioned. And get rid of the character, thats something you should do when your more advanced!

Heres my progression so far, where did i mess up the shadow besides on the top of the S (3rd one)?

 

does that say jnsane

 

aight man, gotta make the extensions even on the i

 

crit plz

 

bro what happend to salty bastard has anyone seen him post anything when is the last time.i used to look up to that guy i still do.im about to get a blackbook and start practicing.my charcters need a little bit more detail and my letter need a little more structure.

 

Salty was dealing with some serious health problems. I have him on facebook and saw he recently had to have brain surgery to remove a tumor. It looks like he made it through the surgery but I haven't seen much activity from him the past few weeks.

 

Decided to get in quick on Paris battle but I just realized I misspelled it.
Killed the vibe

Edit:wtf why is it upsidedown now

 

dude thats not good ill miss him when he goes i hope that we get to kick it in heaven one day and do a collabo or something

 

Shit man there's no guarantee that he's not gonna make it. It looked like he was hanging on strong.

 

i hope soo

 

I tried again and forgot the bloody I
. I'll clean it up later if I feel like it

 

dude i am going to get a blackbook this week coming up finally ima start entering those contests and shit too i just need some clean paper and a clean book that doesnt have that lame sketchbook sketchpad writing on it im going to be alright i just gotto get this shit together and start focusing stop taking my little brothers addies and start drawing on a regular basis without the drugs and shit

 

Damn I haven't been on here for ages.

 

Esone, that shits tight. The I feels a little forced in there to me though. Really nice though.
AlCapwn, hands are looking good, and I can dig the throw you got goin.
Been a long ass time since I've been on here last. College life is a busy thing. Hopefully I'll be posting more frequently again now that things are winding down a little bit. Fell out of practice until very recently so I'm probably not where I would be if I hadn't, but that's not deterring me from getting back in on this so let's do this shit

 

Quick and sloppy before class starts. Random letter word. Crits?

 

first ringo looks cool.

second ringo not so much.