Flows good, but the S sucks work on it

 

Yeah, that's what I'm thinking. Thanks man.

 

my first throwie put to paint. I messed up my c and e... the e and L are bigger than the other letters and the baseline is at slant... my fill is shit... w.e what did i expect for my first go

 

Shadow would have made it look better

Should fix everything on paper before hitting walls again, like that C looks like a P way too much

 

@bt I like it but just clean it up more, I personally don't really like the two droplets coming off of the throwie.

 

Thanks puts. I agree with you.

 

I think that your letter structure has good potential, but the end of the G puts off the flow on the other letters-try doing that throw faster without the drops.

 

Testing out a new fat cap and boy is she a fatty

 

The c is looking much better dude, nice work fixing that. You're on the right track my man. Keep it up.

 

Thanks BT! really appreciate the criticism. If only the L sat a little higher... and i brought the line in more on the e on the top loop. or maybe the e is fine i dunno...and also i wish the bottom parts would have fully connected on all the letters

 

Might even be worth trying to have the e more similar to the c. But all those things you're noticing are great, all that means is you know what to work on next time you do one.

 

This was one of my first throws and i would like to tag this more often but im already paranoid enough and this takes to much time.. Critz? other than the piss poor fill and overlap on the right side lol

 

grosm i agree with IBU

monkey rides that second post is wayy better then the first..of coarse it looks simple and sort of boring at this point but just get the letter size consistency and all that down then get weird with it, keep at it

been a while heres a throw crits welcome

 

Thank you! I know it's boring but I figure I'll work with this till I k with what all the caps do and I get my can control down.

 

did you post the wrong picture or wheres the throwie?

suburb, nice one but for some reason its hard to spot the left side of the M, maybe its too wide. not saying its bad
and the S top is weird, it doesnt close up anywhere?

 

Thanks for the crits I appreciate daat I see what your saying with the M and S..i changed the S up in this abit already but the m I think I just gotta fine tune it abit more again... When I get home later ima post some of the shit I changed up

 

Crits?

 

Your p is pure sexyness, the right side of your u doesn't match the other letters and your t looks like a lower case r

 

Need somethingelse.... I know the N looks like shit.
Any tips?