cleaner lines would look a lot better.. also, it's kinda weird because the first letters are simple and the last two are kinda complex.. besides that, you barely see the v.
Looking good grosm, maybe abit too many unnecessary extensions in the second post but it's good to experiment! it's a common learning curve Saver I agree with koda Puts that's looking nice, just keep making it cleaner and cleaner and experiment too Been a minute since I've drawn criticism appreciated..pen sketches so there not the cleanest
Thanks man. I kinda figured there were too many. That's alright though, it'll come with practice. Glad its not too bad. Gonna get some serious practice in after this week (finals and I'm moving=no real time for graff), I'll be sure to keep posting and trying to progress. Your stuffs always fresh man. My only crit is the m on the first one is kinda lost to me, looks like an O and an N. Maybe just me though
Yehh busy time with priorities lol I tryed looping that one leg of the m over its self sorta but it does look lost lol, thanks man ^looks cool, fix your letter\bar proprotioning though especially with the top of the g leaning over its self like that, looks off to me. Try throwing a drop shadow or 3D on it next time
seems a bit complex in my opinion, try a more simplified version... like the octopuses face... hahaaa and is that only 6 arms.. does that make it a hexopus
You got a lot going on in that picture. Size your letters down make the fit the page, cool character idea. and for that grey as a backdrop idea maybe do a quick drop shadow instead, would look better. keep up
That's cool, I worked with simples back in the day. Sake simple letters. they look good. add a drop shadow or a 3d would make it look dope. trace it and try sum things out.
RINGO: try to work on the flow of your curves. You seem to be on the right track, playing with style but not going too crazy but your curves need to flow better. The ends of your bars have some wonky shapes to them. Bubbling out in ways that don't flow all that well. Also pay attention to your bar widths and how they connect into other bars. The loop of the R merges into the leg in an awkward way. Try drawing perfect circles and spirals sometime, it can teach you the proper flow of curves. Flick for chatter:
..i like that style, RINGO. interested i seeing it filled, too. my cousin in Ohio got this book and i offered to do a couple pages (haven't done the facing-page yet)