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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. NeedForInfamy

    NeedForInfamy Member

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    crits plz

    thought these letters flowed nicely
     

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  2. quickiehand

    quickiehand Senior Member

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    saver - decent ones for now, maybe dont make the A top so pointy and it doesnt have to connect the top part of S since it comes out weird, smushed and kinda sideways. maybe even lowercase A would work? And lowercase E would be cleaner unless you change the uppercase E style. try different things, that will look good pretty soon

    ringo - I like the RI combo and the G. The N is weird again and with the halo it looks like N and I. atleast lose the 4 lines at the start+end.

    Leke - from? and it has some flow but you should not tag that imo, its not great. but its a start.
     
  3. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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  4. "ZOALZ"

    "ZOALZ" Senior Member

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    looks nice... ise! :p like the n, and the yellow paint

    crits

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  5. xXMarla_SingerXxx

    xXMarla_SingerXxx Member

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    WIN_20170514_22_59_55_Pro (2).jpg

    Here's the most recent
    Any tips?
    Need a really good alphabet to help with writing random shit.
     
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  6. "ZOALZ"

    "ZOALZ" Senior Member

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    carbon?

    nice job keeping it simple, and not making things overly complex..

    i think it would look nicer all in one row..

    write your alphabet over and over again, filling dozens of pages every day... develop some dope style over time
     
  7. "ZOALZ"

    "ZOALZ" Senior Member

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  8. ESONE.

    ESONE. Senior Member

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    @Marla post more
    @Croc You have a baseline and the letter structure is consistent now just step it up without arrows and quotes
    @Ringo sweet now try doing your tag without an exclamation mark or halo, and maybe make the n extension smaller
     
  9. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    Solid letters Singer, too bad you're just a figment of Tyler Durden's imagination.
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    Second try at turning it around
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  10. xXMarla_SingerXxx

    xXMarla_SingerXxx Member

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    @Zoalz Thanks a bunch!!
    @Esone I'll work some more in tonight if I pop anything good enough lol
    @Abesk Hot shit dude. Dats Dope. The S is my favorite letter. The K isn't bad but its the weakest of the letters. Just isn't as clean as the others.
     
  11. BAITS

    BAITS Moderator

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    @Abesk very nice. I'd just remove the bottom arrow tho.
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    That's the Germ that is in my area
     
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  12. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Yo abesk thats good stuff there. That A is starting to look a bit like an H now. I'd work on it.
    Singer you have a pretty solid hand there just keep going.
    Ringo lookin good.
    Zoalz just keep grinding.
     
  13. xXSTASOXx

    xXSTASOXx Senior Member

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    @adesk sick, better and better
    @croc I don't know about the backwards arrow, nice job keeping it on a baseline
     
  14. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Ringo: That N looks like an O and a J.

    Zoals: Nice simple letters. That backwards arrow ain't working though and realign the quotations.

    Marla: Keep working on it.

    Abesk: Pretty good. Your B and N need to be sharper. Change up the K a little. The top squiggly thing is a little too much with all the curls. That arrow ain't working. Just do a solid line a little thicker then the one on there now.
     
  15. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Oh yeah, Staso: that looks dope but what does it say?
     
  16. xXSTASOXx

    xXSTASOXx Senior Member

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    Clone thanks dude, been trying to change my account name to clone.
     
  17. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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  18. BAITS

    BAITS Moderator

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    IBU (mr. "7 years of handstyles) id like to see you do better tbh
     
  19. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    Shit, I really appreciate the input from everybody. It's got a long way to go but all them crits are helping out.

    @Acres don't let him bother you homie, he been had a hard-on for me since I joined last year.
     
  20. Lament

    Lament New Member

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    IMG_5243.JPG Is this ready fir the streets? (Wont use crown in public ha)