crits

 

Bets: Those pics you posted took me back over 10 years bro. My homeboy used to do hands just like that. I even tried it but it never fit me.

Loon: Looking cool bro. Only thing you gotta change is the bottom of the E.

Zoalz: Keep practicing homie. Try basic letters or simpler bubbles.

 

Zoalz, just work on your tag, tag after tag after tag... tho i am not at the stage were i am satisfied with my piecing by far, i know that you can transform your tag into a piece. Just keep practicing!

 

Thanks man for the simple piece, and thanks for the advice ill keep working on it.

 

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Your tag doesn't really change from a tag to a piece..

 

i was thinking the same thing. but thanks noz, appreciate any feedback...

my tags are much much better than my throws, basically just started working on em

 

holy shiet if it looks like that, cant wait to see it on a wall

 

Oh shit Al, both of those are dope.

 

Quick marker freestyle

 

Loon your style is definitely coming along. i would recommend starting to work on cleaning up your line work. Your shit could look way better than it does now just by clean and consistent line work

 

Usually don't bother with trying to look clean just work on my letters and shit. Clean it up when I paint lol

 

Hmm ok. why bother using color at all then? practice how you paint.

 

Tried to keep it really simple this time

 

This would be my normal tag style, just done in bars then in plain strokes..

 

nah man, the round one was way better. Gotta keep them letters straight, bending is more advanced..