^^ Needs a lot of work. Those weird shaky lines ain't looking too good. Try straight normal lines, will probably look better. Also, what does it say?

 

@lse292 i think I can see what you're going for and the idea is cool but i think your letter structure needs work
The S doesn't look like an S, I would get rid of the black blots since they get in the way of the letter structure.
The way the O is leaning it kind of looks like a D. I would balance out.

Draw your bars into that sketch and you'll be able to see where the structure doesn't match up.

 

Trying something new.. new E as well. Any crits?

 

Maybe that way

 

Heres an aggressive somer I swear I posted ages ago but cant find

 

Hey guys so I Wana critique I have about 6 to 7 months in graffiti and I don't know if I'm going in the right direction or going to slow so this is the best piece if done so far a bit slopy

 

Don't be sensitive, let's get this out the way, it looks like shit. That being said, why are your lines all scratchy, stop doing that. You're trying way to hard. You don't know your basic letter structure yet, so start there. Practice basic block letters or how you kids say, keyboard letters. Same thing with your tag practice simpler letters. When you have all the simple letter structure down you'll be able to start doing crazier shit. As far as how long it will take you and where you should be at now, it's different for everyone. There's guys who say they've been doing this 10 years and they still suck. There's guys who've been doing it a few months and are fuckin' killing shit. Just practice and put in the time if you really wanna do this.

 

I don't like the e in that it's a different colour to start and its lower case which would be ok if you didn't extend it so much and made the bottom of the main section a bit wider. What do I know I'm a fucking toy

 

That is fucking dope

 

Thanks.

 

I know these letters aren't the best but pretty happy with this as a whole! Finally starting to see some improvement.. crits appreciated!

 

Haven't been able to sketch in a few days but here is a new piece...crits please

 

Getting better man, try to get the Spacing even.. also that K looks too straight it kinda looks forced.

I did a bugs bunny today.. not really feeling my E at all but crits appreciated!

 

@Fizz2 really good but the bottom of the E is off and there is to much blank space in the middle of the E.

 

I noticed both of what you guys said after I posted it and I was looking at it...Thanks for the crits I am working on a concept right now will probably post it tomorrow

 

Crixus battle is up. Please go vote.

Next battle word will be up shortly.

 

I don't know were to post this cause the new format is confusing. But do any of you know the name to the track played in this video? Thanks

 

Crits please?