Not bad, outlines could be crisper

 

The bottom of the S is a little weak and the I could be better.

 

Thnx i will work on it

 

I need to work on my spacing but do you guys think

 

i like it
only thing is, remove the extension on the bottom of the M (near the O there)

 

Crits

 

A bit of my works

 

Thoughts on these bombs entry, I know legibility is a problem and it's messy. The other 2 are experiments.

 

skrit does the first one say melt?
I like your style man, I like the extensions on the bottom one.

 

It says bombs, it was going to be my entry to the sketch competition but then I realised it wasn't legible.

 

Tried something without outline, crits

 

Who am i kinding i fucked up my outline like normaly

 

Latest sketch.. any crits?

 

what does that one on the bottom say?SONA?

 

Yeah Sona

 

Went over the last one, crits?

 

@skrit i think there is too much going on, I would maybe dial down the extensions and focus on the letter

Crits?