crush, there's definitely some real potential in the yellow one. Keep at it. Just work a little on your letters and extensions.

 

That's dope dude. Maybe a white gel pen?

 

A way skinnier outline would've looked way better.

 

this page is bringing in game so I had to post my a game on this one. I think it is pretty good. crits?

 

nice a lil bit

 

Well, its not.

Dont even touch color until you have
A) Better letters
B) Better connections/flow
C) Cleaner lines

 

Crits pleaaaaaase

 

^ Letter structure needs work. Extensions are way off. You should practice basic letters a little more.

 

Dont bother hes being doing this shit forever with earplugs

 

Man I'm try in a get better honstly

 

whalla

 

well fuck thanks, i will get on that bro

 

im going to be honest, that looks terrible to me, i need work on letter structure, guess you definitely need a lot a' work on that too, cut all the extensions, peace.

 

I wish there was a way to just pin a comment that says "Please do straight letters until you sort of know how letters work"

that seems to be a common response for most of these pieces