I like it. looks upgraded. flows not bad. go crush streets not bathrooms my guy.

 

Crits?

 

Looks like caca.

 

I would bring the letters closer together and try some simples, write it out a bunch of times

 

More like this dood? If so I'll write variations and what not till I find some cool ones

 

Focus on legibility, even more simple for now..

You should join the weekly hand style battles too! Will help practice. Keep it up

 

Appreciate the help boss! I'll get to practicing

 

New type of tag, kinda like bushopper flow with some nyc influence. Does it work?

 

Alright made it a bit tighter and looked back at where I went wrong turning the P and L into an R last time. Pretty sure this evening was a step in the right direction with my tag; which I should really perfect to a degree before picking up my cans again. Crits?

 

Needs more flow, or uniformity. The O just pops off like it doesnt even belong to the rest of the tag. Try to get some simple flow in there nothing complex (letters same height, letters leaning at the same angle etc..)

 

Let me know

 

aser, still writing metro tho.

 

yea thats a gang in chicago called GDs

 

STOMPDOWN KILLAZ

 

Aser crits?

 

Hey


Crits?

 

@staso connect the E to the R think that'd be dope. it'll save time in the street. everything else is good.

Or,

Ignore my critique cos' you think I'm toy.

 

Critique?

 

Hey guys, new here and new to graff. I've been working on my tag for a couple months. Trying to keep it simple what do you guys think? Trust me it's way better than when I first started haha! B and Z are a nightmare together but I really liked my name so I kept at it.