Personally I'd say make the tops of the seoe less open And the a seems a bit soft Edit: fuck I mean don't touch the top to the circle thing of the a Idk I can't articulate very well
after those last crits. Wrote this as fast as possible without losing structure. Changed the E to e as well. Tried to level out the middle bars of all the letters
S+E not too connected like others, E is too low. props for keeping it simple tho Just try shit out and post again later when you find something new to you which you like but not sure about, we cant crit every little change to your tag just have fun with it
Greetings, NEW TO THIS REALM.. help a mate out... Crits please? not sure if any of these are remotely good. Perhaps start from scratch? sos.