yeah, the problem here is too many arrows, gumonshoe, isnt it... goddamit these battle forums are depressing... im holing myself back into the intermediate thread
@skrit. im just now realizing how many little tweaks I accidentally copied from yours without even knowing... my bad. Lol.
Crits appreciated, I think it's all too far apart and has to have more flow.. not sure how to do that haha
I think some lines are kinda too long others too short so proportions are wierd like the n and w so maybe work more on getting stuff equal idk. And too much those double bits i would skip them
I vote elik even tho otrock is cool too but the long line on the left should have come out lf the n instead of the c then maybe would be 1st place