..Maybe try to keep all those letters in the same style with similar proportions or how to call it (bar thickness etc..) and don't overlap them too much (like the 'r' and 'i' in your sketch) ^^ I'd do it somehow like that.. (sorry my drawing skills on a phone are wack) ...the simple letter style that you used to sketch 'name exchange' sketches was nice so maybe focus on that one and develope it and about the piece - just use spray cans more often and you'll get the can control pretty soon. ..hope it helps))
Nice to see you got your hands on some paint man, I'd keep the letters simpler for now though if I where you. Everyone can appreciate a well executed, clean straight letter. I'm not saying take all your stylised bits out, but focusing on bar width and can control will stand you in good stead going forward. My first piece from 8 and a bit years ago came up on time hop the other day. It says DGI, Feel the steez
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