I'm doing mostly straight letters but every once in a while i do something crazy. Thoughts?

 

didn't use bars. use bars man, it's an easy way to make shit look proper.

 

Crits on these?

 

I'll add a background later. Crits?

 

What's up everyone. Here's a few sketches from this year, just looking for some feedback. Is there any particular style that stands out to you? Anything that looks wack? Any areas of improvement I should focus on (letters, fills, color schemes, etc)?

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, go ahead and roast my work, but please be specific.

 

Thanks for the response. I like the green straight lettter a lot too. The photo kinda crushes the green shades together but theres a lot going on within the fades. The 3D is a little off but oh well.

 

The blue throw is by far the best, seems like ur much better at straight simpler letters though, also the 3rd piece looks nice just need cleaner lines and the S is a little too wide

 

Crits?

 

You talking about top right?

 

Haven't posted in mad long needa get as good as I was so anyone wanna exchange that way I get the brutal honest criticism?

 

I'm down. How good are you? You might want someone better?

 

Nah I welcome everyone g is all love we all trying to get better

 

I write bored but idc all welcome

 

Thats that wannabw ol' skool shite!

 

What I got craving so far for you skirt gonna put some more on it then pen it

 

Some more shit, my bad for posting in 2 different posts. Off to sleep i go

 

Crits?

 

Since i hate explaining shit over text, heres a edited piece. Pay attention to how wide your bars are (marked in red)

With blue I marked some weird additions that seemingly come out of nowhere.

But im really feeling the "Sy" combo, you made it flow really well!

 

Thanks, I felt the extensions off the R were nescessary for balance.