Several months ago, much more recent (and better) flux coming soon once I can get pics. I work a lot lately. Get off in early mornings . Lol
Maybe try making the bottom and top of your s the same size and bring the line back more on your e cus right now it looks like it's chin is up and sucked in give it a big strong chin to match the s .
Hi, i'm new here I have some throwies here for you to critique. Love all you writers worlwide x. I look forward to seeing all your work. Nice one
You need to put a line or a swoop in your h man and it will look alot better (heso) But if that says herd you need to proportion your (r) better to becuse I thought it was a s And your d is lacking structure. It looks like a o I bet alot of this could be fix bye working bigger instead of using a coner of the page use the middle . Try stretching your letter virtually. Top to bottom .