first throwie, its pretty trash so crit it as much as youd like, on paper i am much better, with cans its a different story

 

I am no expert at all but I would say if you are going for the boxy look make the s like that too because it looks kinda out of place

 

ok someone else said the same, keep the letter styling consistent, use all one form, got it thanks

 

Always forward. Always

 

1.
What is this? Elbow already corrected it in his post. is there a part of the "D" showing through?
Or is it a negative space, which you accidentally filled? Eeither way it doesn't really work.
See the green "R", I put above. Thats how a capital "R" should look.
The two red ones show how I would see the "R" in your throw.

2.
Your "H" doesn't have a sharp corner in the top left.
So why should it throw a sharp cornered shadow?

3.
Your shadow is off centered to the left.
But at the bottom of your letters you simply ignore this.
Added to squares with shadow, so you can see what I mean.

4.
What is this???

 

Bruh... 110
+330? If your paying 330 a zip you must be living in NYC or sumin.

Thats not much of a profit margin but I hope you got to smoke at least.

Just lookin out for you man.

 

330 a zip fuck thatt

 

Damn i pay 180 in miami but when i was in oregon they had specials for 50 bones

 

I seen a pic of a sign saying 5 $ eigths and 40 $ oz that's crazy cheep . I sell my 8ths for 40 lol

 

Looking a little better.

 

I pay 150. Sell 1/8 for 35.

 

That's a lot better now the leg of your r is to big but alot better !
I pay 180 .good friends and family get it for 35 but every one els 40 . I get 1 gram carts for 35 . And flip for 60

Hcp on some henny only right

 

Hmm so we all do the same thing. Lol. Cool

 

kewl

 

I'm not retarded but

 

Here some more scribbles

 

First one on a wall

 

That z is alot better

 

Not bad, just work on that tag.