I dig the first one!

 

Can you guys give me some feedback on these? They're a couple of my first ever actual throwies. I know it's general rule to only do pieces on trains, but I literally have no where to write where I live.

https://imgur.com/a/8vmg3nb

Ran out of paint on one of them. LOL

 

Not great pacing or composition but this is my first real try.

 

I actually really like the color scheme, just clean up the letters a bit.

 

Thanks! I know I need to balance them a bit better and space everything out a bit more. I was thinking of putting them on the same plane as well so I can work on interconnecting them. Is there anything blaring to you that could use improvement?

 

Now I’m pretty toy myself, but I feel like you should take all those jagged lines out and make them straight. You should have a consistent theme. If you want it to look cracked, just add them at the end. (Seems hard to do, but it’s really not, just look at pictures online.)

 

You’re not a toy!!

 

Are you writing cuck, or buck?

 

Been thinking about changing my name to something with letters that I can add more style or originality to. Rn my throwie to me is very basic and I’ve tried to do different things with the letters and it looks like shit

 

Been thinking bout the name “mave” (ignore the terrible tag)

 

I like mave, easy to say, 4 letters and plently of good letteribg opportunities. I've been trying to settle on a name and I'm having trouble settling in one. I was bombing BMD for a while and I have a tag I like for that one but I want something 4/5 letters. Recently I've been throwing up Nibbler but still to long

 

Need some criticism on this

 

Nice try Urbano

 

Hi this is one of my throwies, any crits or feedback? elbow, herd i like your stuff.

 

oh shit didnt know their was already a kaps sorry man

 

No its ok i don't care its just i thought you were this guy called urban since he uses lots of alts to troll.

 

decent

 

anything i can do to improve it? still looks a bit wack

 

try making some small changes and seeing how it goes