im gonna be honest that too long for me, you sound entitled to claim everyone is disqualified, who are you, wheres you resume. If venom said it, Sanguine, bugs one id get it. You give good crits, but you still enjoy peeing against the wind though. join the battles, no hate. join us O.O
Peeing against yhe wind aint fun for no one lol . But I still didnt get a crit ray lol haha fuck is it that bad haha lol
yo, im gonna coment everyone 'cause i hate when people ignore my entry -.- DBZ, i don't really love anything about it, the C is not bad, i think you should not connect the letters that much, they are all connected and it just looks a bit weird for me. I mean, im sure it can be done, but should be better done in my opinion. The color combination is my favorite thing about your sketch and you have good traces so you just have to keep practicing...also i dont like the stars but that's just a personal preference ELBOW, i like the flow of this piece. also, nice tag. the F is the worst letter but i guess someone had talked about that already, other than that, i really like your letters and its the thing i'm more jealous about because everything looks very effortless GANE, i like your color scheme, is very fun...the letters, i would say maybe simplify. i like how compact it is lol, but you still gotta work on the letters (like me) KAPS, same as Gane...also, the 3d, i know someone talked about it already, imagine its like a shadow, the lines must be all going in the same direction or to the same point, i dont know how to explain better, but just google how to do 3d and once you get it its the easier thing to do. But i would say your letters look cleaner than Gane's (less the C, it looks bad) because they are more simple and with the same thickness all the time PESK, is my favourite because it's crazy good. there is nothing i dont like about it, i would love to see it with color. awesome letters and i love how fun it is with the hand and the eyes and all the connections SKRIT, very simple, the letters are good, maybe the A is a little weird, maybe too big or rounded i dont know. the C also looks a little bit too small in comparison with the rest of the letters. but is a good sketch since it probably took you like 15 minutes to make THEILLFUN...nice effort, this is in my top 3, because it has a good flow. the letters are not my favorite though. there are some fat things, like in the lower E and above the A (in green) that i dont understand URBAN, probably the 2nd best for me, i always apreciate the sketch more than the digital, but i think is cool that you can do it like that and that we have diversity here. the letters are really good, just the F looks kind of like an S more. i also dont really like that heart with the arrow there haha, i know it probably was to hide that fat arrow you had in the A, its better haha but still looks a little forced. and i love the way you painted it, nice colors and effects uf, im tired. dont totally listen to me cause this is just my opinion and i also still have a lot to learn and of course, Pesk gmv
Don't be jelly bro it will come keep it simple and after a while you will be able to do with no effort Your back ground is dope I like it alot . Your letters could be better but just keep keeping it simple and you'll be there .
I slept on this. I got stalled on coloring! Here’s mine - unfinished. I just wanted to put it out there. I know I’m late.
I post about 10 times a year so final words before I fade away like Krylon for a bit. That Gane was improved by the redo. Should have used your letters to fill the space where you stuck that star in. You made some negative space between the Ch so that should have continued with more of the letters. Color too dark. Yellow outer would have worked better than red to pop it off, and with more negative space between letters would highlight your letters better. Like those drip spots on the letters. El Bo- you want it you gonna get it. Same way I said you bring your L down and left more to your E, you do the same thing with this outline on your H. You've made a symmetrical outline but didn't balance that spot. The C & E extensions are like random pubes that should be shaved off. They do nothing for the letter and you'd be better dropping the bar from the top of your E down to fill that space. Random green patch is ugly. Your gripe about being intermediate: this place used to be more live. Quick look around and not sure where it all went, but did find some. BS has around 10 members and most fall to the top and bottom leaving you with maybe 2 people at your level. IMHO, you won't win, but they should let you in there for now while it's slow/dead because I don't see you learning much in a toy group and you need someone just a bit above you to learn from. Same time you need to whip your ass into shape and stop stupid mistakes like above. Did not waste much time on this but found a few sketches in other thread by better writers and it was all cool, def well above your level. Good use of space, good use of colors. Sharp clean lines with flow, motion, animation that move your eye through the piece. Few different styles representative of countries they came out of. On a black book level, you're not ready for that yet. On the other hand, you had a decent somewhat symmetrical outline I commented on somewhere that IMO, is what I would call wall ready. If you did that clean, good colors, maybe add a character, I don't see why that can't hang on it's own. Last- less is more. Your hand on top of that Chafe, that would be a good outline. It's balanced, decent flow. I would lightly do that across a piece of paper leaving room for 3D on the right, thicken it out into letters. And Pesk still wins.