That is phenomenal! Really solid old school flow! i think that's part of my issue. I scrunch my letters too close together instead of letting them breathe a bit more.
Thank you. Well, i like your entry, got a good flow. I hit the edge of paper, so in my eyes mine looks squeezed too. I'd prefer shorter words.
Just FYI, I am biting that cubish way you have Bombing Science on the upper left. I won't be an actual bite. Different words. I just love the concept and I am hijacking it for when I label a series of sketches I do. That idea alone was gold.