I think your E should be more thick, like the another letters. You have to take care about the space between the letters, it shoult be similar for all these. Peace
learn basic perspective. the 3d lines should be converging to the vanishing point. or just have the 3d all go towards one direction.
needs more detail/ swag/ design to be considered a piece, but its pretty solid block letters . step out the comfort zone and start addin some drip , you have talent here