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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. skkkrt

    skkkrt Member

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  2. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    Looks fresh @skkkrt
    That whole throw is round besides the Z, might think about incorporating a point in the R

    Had to knock the dust off, it’s been damn near two years

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  3. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    Lose the negative space in the Cs and between the R and I
     
  4. Cmb337

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    Ran out of paint so I know I have issue with width.
    Would you continue to work on bends or got straight back to block letters?

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  5. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    Straight letters. Letter form is not clear here, especially with all the connectors.
     
  6. Cmb337

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    I hear you. I forgot to put up the sketch too. Seeing the sketch , more specifically, can control issues or style issues?
     
  7. Abesk

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    CHLOE? The sketch makes a bit more sense, but here's a few things that are wrong
    • Spacing - the H looks like two separate letters, can't tell where one letter starts and the next ends
    • Bar width - the crossbar on the H is the same width as the connector growth things? also it varies throughout most letters, make it all same width for now
    • Letter structure - this is THE MOST IMPORTANT thing to work on, everything else is extra, those random bars obliterate the letter structure
    Definitely focus on your straight letters and can control for a while, and lose the extras.

    Good luck
     
  8. Cmb337

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    Yeah.
    It's my kids name , not what I used to write or am considering writing.
    It's been along time since I wrote 17- 18 years.
    I'm comfortable with my handstyle and basic black and white trow up.
    I'm 100% positive I'm trying not to bite anyone's style. That's where the extra comes from . I definitely hear you ,its not working.
    I was telling myself it's all can control . I'm adjusting to the cans and tips. Ironlak and Montana gold dont do like krylon and rustoleum.
    Thanks though. Back to the books. Not saying I was ever putting up burners . But definatly use it or lose it.
     
  9. daka46

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    i need criticism

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  12. Cmb337

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    Look at the comments on my shit right above your post.
    Then look at my comment Iposted in the toy slaps threat yesterday I ironically covered some of the same advice prior to posting on this thread. But I have an example of the points I hit. From hand style to burner and everthing between, the concepts of the suggested reads apply. Maybe get a color wheel.
     
  13. SpawnCamp

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    Whoopwhoopwhoop

    Quick throw
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  14. SpawnCamp

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    Some width fuck ups on the lower letters
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  15. PeskDos

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    BURP eh nice calligraphy style throwie BURRRRP its better than whatever the fuck is above that CRAP
     
  16. PeskDos

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    make ur letters the same size for now... then post pic to see how that turns out for more crits..
     
  17. Denlo

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  18. Isaias

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    20190711_233235.jpg new to the site. Sharing some drawing I did.
     
  19. MrSixes

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    Fuck You..buy some pens or gtfo.
     
  20. Nabru

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    Fuck you OG,,this is not the place for you to be trying to make a comeback.