Trying to improve my tag, any critique

 

Egg shell

 

Working on new styles

 

Digis

 

That’s dope. You on pro create ?

 

Spaghetti

 

Nah some android shit ibis paint x

 

Dusty

Market price

 

Don’t know if this is the right place for this, but I’m working on my tag, any advice or crits would be super helpful!

 

I know they aren’t the best, looking for any crits?

 

Definitely developing some really nice style. I would get rid of the arrow on the U though, kind of breaks up the fluidity and flow of the tag.

@mopbucket I like it, keep getting hands up out there. Those drips are fresh

@arzer you're really showing signs of some really nice style here. Not a fan of the extension on the R, kinda breaks the flow. Definitely keep at it and keep experimenting, just don't overdo it and remember your letter structure

@ElbowMacK187 Love both your posts as usual

@bigmerge Cleanest shit I've seen in a while

@Kaps2 on point

@SpawnCamp love the dusty tag

@Dinki_One My only advice is to keep it simple from the beginning, don't overdo it on extensions. Also keep your letters legible, don't overlap them until you have a good understanding of letter structure. Look around on the forums, look at how others have progressed their hands (don't copy obviously). I personally went around in circles for a good year trying to overcomplicate a tag and add more to it, which only left a tag with no structure, mess everywhere and just gross to look at. My best tags are my clean, simple ones.

@Supra475 I like it

I'll try get some of my shit out soon, still getting back into it.

 

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Ayyy good looks my guy
Heres some more recent ones

 

So something more simple like this? ( went for a name change)

 

Yeah looking good there

 

Thanks for the advice man! Really appreciated

 

first time touching a can, I’m a toy but i’m not sensitive lmk

 

on paper

 

and another one i think think this one personally had more flow

 

and ima just drop this last one haha it’s 5:57 am over here