Crits on my piece? If it's super wack I'll move it myself. I notice the O and M's bar width and shape is a bit off, the L should have been closer to the M. I shouldnt have done that bullshit on the bottom left part of the m inside the o, or at least learn how to do that style properly, might stop doing that altogether cause it's not coming out right. Also I should come up with a better serif to use for myself too. Everything else I think is decent idk. Any ideas on how to further improve? I've never really posted pieces on here cause they always end up wonky, but I want to get into the swing of dropping pieces cause that's just natural progression. Ideas for pieces and themes pop up on occasion and it would be cool to be able to capture those ideas and put them on something. Edit: working on my drop shadow too. My problem is proportions. Gotta try to retain consistency with my proportions but it's hard for me. I blamed being left handed for the longest but I just never found a solution
Come join the bi-weekly battles. Doing different Words and themes is a great practice and will push you to improve.
I cant keep up with the color schemes and flows you guys do lol. I'm not artistically inclined. May be one day when I finally sit down and try to learn color theory I'll try to compete with you guys. We'll see
Your telling people whove been on this site for close to ten plus years about a thread they know about . if they wanted to they would have . theres really no reason for sombody like satire to come whipe his ass with all the shit that gets posted in there . mine included . omlets better off doing simple shit for a bit b3cuse hes just starting to peace . but should stay true to his roots cus his throws are nasty . so I fuck with his peace and the shit he was trying to do . really omlet its all trial and era from here ! You could deff keep up with more then half of us mang
You mean stick to my roots as in like incorporate my throw up style into my pieces? If so yeah, Obers suggested I do that a while ago and as you can see I'm trying but still learning. Here's a little character from my blackbook for the talk
I never got a vote in bi weekly battles lol, its still fun. Eba hope you dont mind if i put your covid in the battles..
Regardless of skill level.....Eba may help inspire some of us toys. I'm well aware his skill level is above ours but I'm certainly not concerned about "winning". Its the process I enjoy as well as learning from other peoples pieces!! The more dope pieces...the better!!
God damn... Folks. I appreciate it, but there are definitely people better than me. I do feel the support. Thank you all for the love! Really! I did the Covid19 piece because my homie Disob from my crew suggested it was a nice word. I ain't really trying to battle over it. Just rocking it for fun. Had no idea it was even a battle. Do what you want but let's all chill. People can let their big heads and egos get in the way of doing things.
I was just saying you know about the bi weekly battles. It aint a new thing im sure you dont know the word cus you dont go check in on it all the time witch was my point lol. If you wanted to you would . I mean theres really no point tho it aint a battle when you Winn all the time how could that be fun ? Espicaly when you be crushing the black book ology ones . Heres a lol something for my words