That's what I was talking about in my tag...I want more slang in mine like yours

 

No lie. Half of it is looking at others and studdying and then half is just doing it!(with no fucks)! after u have a basic tag have fun with it get lose ."get down" .

 

Elbow the second picture is better than the first the first one looks pretty rushed if you did the same one again with a couple different methods it would look fresh.

 

Elbow the second picture is better than the first the first one looks pretty rushed if you did the same one again with a couple different methods it would look fresh.

 

Elbow the second picture is better than the first the first one looks pretty rushed if you did the same one again with a couple different methods it would look fresh.

 

Pretty basic, not much to comment on. I dont like how the letters arent connected, especially the E. Also no need to post every tag here without any progression. Just go copy some other dudes to get a sense of some kind of style. You will start to develope your own automatically when you're ready.

Last one attempt on philly? Pretty fun looking, I like it overall. Would fix the E and clean up after the O, it gets really messy and the W gets lost in there.

Gotta give ops to get ops.

It says SUGER? SITGER? SIAGER?

Lose the horizontal line on the U, do it just up and down once so lose the 3rd "leg".

You could try lowercase E and connect the letters more, I dont like the spaces between letters. R is kinda boring, could spice it up since its last letter and easy one to make look better.

S and G are clean, those are good.

 

W is lost Probly becuase it says elbo one and not elbow .
But i agree the second e is sloppy and the o needs refineing for sure

 

First time with a can. Posting now so I can point back at it as I improve.

Grabbing some markers and paper to get sketching... And gonna find a wall I can practice on.

 

Tagging the tank...also used quickiehands advice but I dont like all caps but the e

 

any crits for this tag?

 

that acc looks pretty sick ngl, what u trying to spell out tho, azeroze?

 

supposed to say merge the extentions make it hard to read and i might need to change up that M

 

lmao i see that now. sorry my bad

 

Maybe keep the 1st leg of your m straight like the 2nd one...it will probably throw people off a little less, and the g needs just a little more refining. Looks like cool tho

 

Id lose the triangle in 2nd E to keep them consistent, M could make more clear, give maybe G more space, it looks like a throwie C. But the R is nice and clean and overall nice one liner.

 

critiques please

 

No need. Flow, style, spacing all on point.

 

one of mine

 

Fish