These should be in order of my progression except the Llama thats my first painting with a brush . And then this girl is the last painting iv done But lately iv been Putting more effort into my beats and my music .
ok i hate how i look at this three days later and am disgusted by how bad it is i think this is an improvement? no color though
Stop doing connections and work on your letter proportions/ bar widths first. Like most people you've got cool ideas but unable to execute it properly because you've yet to learn the basics, like everyone else has said.
oh yeah i forgot to upload the main letters i meant to upload this too also can you tell me what is wrong with the piece? i know i need to practice basic stuff and i am but i also want to know what im doing badly in this
Spacing between letters, and bar width consistency. Make all of the letters separate (not touching or overlapping) and show us something with all the bars the same width, it's not hard for most of us but believe me I was shit when I first joined these forums till I started doing a shit load of simples/ keyboard letters