too much shit in it, lose the quotes and the loopie shit at the bottom and ending of it. also lose the halo because from what i heard it only for people that have hit highway overpasses, or so i've been led to believe.
also, you should change your name, it's mad taken.
how about taki183 or stayhigh149?
those sound like good names.

 

i dunno i dont think its that bad... i have definatly seen worse...
and can anyone find a list of these halo, and crown rules cause ive never heard of em and i question their existance???

 

ok,I know the crown is when your all-city,so your THE,or one of the biggest writers in your city/region.

that halo thing i didnt know till that post^^ a little higher,but i guess its explained eh?

 

if anyone here wants to help me at all aim = WU T4N6

 

kool

 

too much shit in it, lose the quotes and the loopie shit at the bottom and ending of it. also lose the halo because from what i heard it only for people that have hit highway overpasses, or so i've been led to believe.
also, you should change your name, it's mad taken.
how about taki183 or stayhigh149?
those sound like good names. [/b][/quote]
k. thats just a fancy way i write it. but i think ill stay with dozer.

 

Dozer i think thats fine leave it as it is just get more styles and work on ur flow
but wat u got there i find is pretty nice and kaiser stick to sketchin for now man hit in streets when u can do a desent 1 liner at least were u live anyways kaiser?


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ha.

 

thanks man ill show you a little diff way i write it though. ill put the pic on here later to show you. hey i live in dallas, tx.

 

aight i'll post more shit too just sketches for now tho cuz i havent got a digital cam to takes pics

Heres somethin i just hade on my computer


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u like it??for a toy

 

Some of the handstyles I am seeing are actually good... for a toy.

 

well, for starters, you skipped a letter.
the advice i got in terms of lettering like that at the beginning was to look at cereal boxes, the lettering on them is usually simple but elegant and esthetically pleasing. also, make sure that your letters ar roughly the same size, and that each one is about equal distance from each other. the gap between the z and the r looks really wierd.
on another note, the handstyle at the bottom is headed in the right direction. keep working, it comes in time.

 

oh, and on another note blazer, i can see that you didn't just go on the internent and copy a graffiti font or use a creator. that is also very promising.

 

damn, looks like my bro took the camera to montreal with him so ya'll gonna have to wait for tuesday cause i got some more flix to post

this time with no crown lol

 

lol,hey metro,how long you been writing,i cant remember if you said how long

 

eh, i ve been writing seriously for about 8 months but before that it was everyday in math class just doodling in my binder and stuff...

 

only one i got on da comp. advice is VERY welcome....

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plz comment on theses(i know they suck and btw they say booba)(i know boobas a gay name)(eske if you read this your gay)