well for staters you need some letter structure i thought the "U" was a "Z" cause of the zig zag at the beginning... space out you letters a little more so they aint so cramped in together and if your going to out line then out line the tag do it all the way around i see a thick out line on the zig zag then a huge space where the out line should be on the "O" anyways i hope this helps...
[Broken External Image]:http://img334.imageshack.us/img334/361/megscanvas1nf.jpg well here was one that i did like months ago for my g/f, but ive definatley improved since then.
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that was probably unnessecarily mean. what you need to work on man is your lettering. start by printing it regularily on a piece of paper, then start fiddlingwith the letters, adding a little style, while still protecting the accual letter form, if it is an e it should look like an e, not be some sort of star of juda with a smily face in it. that was just an example. keepsketching. P.S. in terms of esthetics, you should try and keep all the letters roughly the same size, or have them get linearly larger or something, not just random hugeness and tinyness. if you want to work on a handy that maintains a style like thatm draw two lines, one on top of the other, that move slowly farther apart. then work your letters into that. EDIT: what is it supposed to say?
ok, if you want some real feedback here it is... 1: make sure all letters are reletively on the same line as the others. 2: dont make letters out of extensions like the bottom of the "C" crossing for the line in the "A" 3: in a handstyle not all letters have to be connected by one line, you can, but i personally dont like it
yeah man I dont think u should use bubble letters with handstyle letters lol..keep em on the same length..I jsut got handstyle though but keep practicing
Hey guys, here's a couple of my tags that ive been working on. comments/critisizm please. [Broken External Image]:http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/mugz3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/mugz2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/mugz1.jpg
The same way you'd say the letter 'H'... or how'd you say 'ACHE' would work too... but I'm going with 'H'...