comon man, you start off with a really bad peice on the wall, then you show the sketch and its just as bad.

usually you start off with a sketch, so you can get it wrong and not look bad.
so i would have sketched it like that, and then realized it wasnt very good, and
then started over.

 

yo heres one i painted really quik awhile back feedback

http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/2293/hobsp9cw.jpg

 

^^^damn thats beautiful....i love it = )

 

thanks girl much love

 

is it HOBS cause if it is, that arrow on the H makes it really hard to read.

but it looks pretty nice thought.

 

theres no arrow on the h look again

 

i heres a sketch i did...[Broken External Image]:http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/1791/dscf02785pq.jpg
suggestions?

 

it looks like 3 lines to me, the h usually takes 2 verticle whats with the 3rd one. or am i seeing ssomething? :?
[Broken External Image]:http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/2293/hobsp9cw.jpg

 

there is only two the far one goes with the
line through the middle
H
^

 

oh, well i think thats the problem.
it looks like a pitch fork or somekinda W


JOC i like it, just work with the 0 a bit.

 

thanks man, i had a regular O but it didnt fit in so i added the little point thing on the right side idk lol, any suggestions? should i go out n paint anytime soon?

 

practice

 

i have been, you should see some of the shit i did when i used to write mess and issa

 

then keep on keepin on

 

yeah, any suggestions on the O?

 

i went down to the hella chill spot and i forgot to take pictures of wat to look for sry meetermaid and it was hella dark inside there so my shit came out pretty bad but im pretty satisfied for like no light and my first paint so ya, tell me wat u think

RK throwie
[Broken External Image]:http://img492.imageshack.us/img492/3457/remik0624bm.jpg

REMIK (forgot the letters i was workin on wen i got there )
[Broken External Image]:http://img492.imageshack.us/img492/1244/remik0631vw.jpg

heres the other piece i missed that was in there
[Broken External Image]:http://img492.imageshack.us/img492/7665/remik0613gn.jpg

and u kno "me" first piece i seen by him, wen i saw it i was like DAMN THATS CLEAN
[Broken External Image]:http://img500.imageshack.us/img500/7578/remik0650xz.jpg

 

you need to work on coloring in the lines lol

 

no he needs to work on doing his outlines.
looks like you rushed the outline, slow it down cause it looks sloppy.
take the extra few to make it nice.

 

[Broken External Image]:http://img493.imageshack.us/img493/7208/fate616jj.jpg
shit i never posted cause its not that good. but im bored