Hey someone please critique my shit. Its my very first sketches and shit. I mean like very first. So let me know. What you think. http://pg.photos.yahoo.com/ph/demitrix69/a...rix69/my_photos

 

well i'm no expert but you got the simple lettering down fine, try adding more style into them like arrows, backrounds, colors... try bringing ur letter closer together, again i'm no expert...

 

coulds someone check out ma work and tell me what they think? i've just starrted graffiti so i really could use some tips. just crithique ma stuff... thanks
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My Pics and Vid. storage

 

Holy shit, you go to my school. hahahaha.
I swear, in those flare videos, that was my school.

 

Thanks Skar, i checked your shit, its pretty dope. Since I had to ask you for criticism, i dont think i could rightly criticize your work.

 

Well, the only thing I would think, is that on the tops of your slime skar the letters are very thin in some spots compared to the others, and they are thin in your wildstyles

 

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someone tell me wut i need to improve.Its preety sloppy. I suck so i need alot of help.

 

a little something something....(having fun with the ballpoints )
for laughs and giggles:

 

come on, i know it's messy, but SOMEONE's got to give crit! [/b][/quote]
try to be semetrical.

 

eze im really feelin the first one nice letters

 

whoops

 

wtf keeps reposting

 

phil thats fine with me, cept i dont really wanna fight you, call me a pussy or whatever but i have nothing against you, what i said when i was freestyling (what people told me i said) was fucked up, and i had no idea so word i take that back, but i dunno wut the graff beef is about, you gotta admit were around the same skill level, both trying to get us and our crews up in the city, theres no need for crossing each other out, but if thats what has to happen than so be it, im really feelin that red character in the second last sketch

Peace

 

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Ez3kieL i like the bubble one

 

thanks bro.

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thanks, glad someone also like the bubbles too.

btw, just an opinion, i wouldnt have that second C poking thru the O. it just doesn't flow with the rest of the style you've already setup in the rest of the letters.

 

bump

 

bump (aye ezekiel u from da sco?)

 

uhh i know its pretty crappy but wut u guys think....and is that what you meant by omore defined?

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more defined. its like your letters are just sort of normal theres nothing different about them, my interpretation on "defined" is with more style.