the blocky straight letters aint bad. the other shits hurtin though


try and make the letters tighter together

 

hey havoc, thank oyu for the feedback...what should i make tighter the blocks or the piece? cause if its the piece i dont really see how i could make them tigheter without intesne overlaps, but thanks again its been a while with those in my mind and i finally got them out on paper..ohh and hte pink think thats just a little thing i was fuckin aroudn with this letters i always see "waster12" doing

 

i mean like change your letters so that they are flush, without overlaping

 

ok thanks

 

bump any criticism [/b][/quote]
yo are all those stickers?.. i got a new book today, but its got all these damn bumps on it... i dont know if stickies will stick on it

 

Sorry for bumping my own shit, but we where passed over on it.
Comments?

 

AHHHHH havent been on here in like a month good to see some dope shit. Much props diwat thats sick bro!!

 

Sorry for bumping my own shit, but we where passed over on it.
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I like that ALOT

good work diwat

 

ya man that is sick! i like how it just flows! good work man

 

first page.. new book..

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I like your "s"

but your "I" and "N" don't really flow with the "s" much

maybe if the s was moved up...

 

you need like, a longer name or sumthin.

 

hahah u always call me runic [/b][/quote]
:lol: cas it sounds better

 

Sorry for bumping my own shit, but we where passed over on it.
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your 3D seems to be off...specially the whole bottom right/middle part.

 

it's just the funky fill for the 3d, i'm pretty sure if it was all black you'd see it normal

 

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Comments Please

 

here is my first attempt at revos in my blackbook . its not close to being done but any comments so far?

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edit...
kinda small and hard to see some of the detail,.ill post a bigger one if anyone wants to see..ill finsh it soon

 

im liking all leters except the R

 

ya i know that R is hard to get right...haha ive fucked with any too a bunch of times, any ideas of how i could make it flow better?