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i like it rek, but what does it say? rekcn?, oh wait, that's an o? rekon? either way it's fresh, just close up the O a little more i think

 

ya rekon, thanks for the positive feedback...keep it comin

 

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comments just tryin to get some nice straigh letter now..was freestyle biro moment dont really like the bottom one i like the top one

 

nice clean letter s.bob,
i like the bottom one the most...

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any comments???

 

the H & A r nice but u need to get the R & F to the same style...

you should try doing what i did just go for simple but styled letter

 

yeah, chears for the comment, i know were your going. The R and F dont flow together... i'll work onit.

 

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try to keep the letters the same size

 

start simpler, I cant tell what that is between d and a

 

repost
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aaaand adding more
this ones a new word style im working on. I likthe bottom one best.
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and another(bad) attempt at 3D
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and heres the last one. ignore that mess on the bottom
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feedback? crits? comments?

 

any crits, feedback, etc?

 

tttttt

 

can i bump for some criticism?

 

u can, work harder on ur stuff kido

 

Thanks Detroit but when you say simpler could you be more specific, like do you mean simpler overlapping, letter structure, extensions on the D and E, or something else?

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http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0046pu.jpg

^ jsut a throw wut ya think?

 

try it bigger and more blockish first then go 2 wut style that is goin 2 b hopefully this is a constructive comment and u try it

 

any comments/suggestions?!? try not to be too harsh
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