Just got my first blackbook yesterday so these are what ive done so far

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any coments would be appreciated

 

work on your letter structure and take that crown (if thats what it is) off of your piece..
also your 3d is off terribly in the 2nd sketch..it looks like you used a vanishing point but it didnt work out right

 

whoa ur on a roll there

 

bump-worthy.com

 

first page in new ginat blackbook
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fornt cover of new mini blackbook
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got both today

 

nice shit letter
i got me a new mini black book today too..and these neon colored prismas

 

is u throw up suppose to say yare cus i cant read any letter cept for e

 

ya it says yare
but i can read it just fine so its allll good

 

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I dont really get the structure that much, but it's dope lookin i guess.

 

ur r dosnt really look like an r

 

bumpp for critz

 

idk i can read it fine...bomb hard bro

 

naa yall not understanding me i got da code from photobucket but wut do i do on dis shit

 

whipped this together real quick so i could try out my 2 new prisma colors
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and this is another throwie
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ahhh im not really feeling the 1st one but i like the second one

 

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not really feelin the E

 

dont go too mad with the colours yet, all i can say at the moment is just keep the letters at a simpler structure... and lay off the force feild bar things... [/b][/quote]
I reall dont know how i can go more simpler but what eva