I aint getting up ya adlay but when ur doing highlights there supposed to be on the opposite side of the shading. [/b][/quote] dude there is no shading aside from the color fade
dude there is no shading aside from the color fade [/b][/quote] shading = 3d eh... might as well bump for crits while im posting anyways [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/5b4fe266.jpg
the 3d is off in some placesim not sure what the second letter is or the fourth letter for that matter overal i dont like it
Bump because I'm gay and feel that I didn't get enough critisism on my third piece I've ever done. Oh, and I write Wrekone and Atmos, so you don't get too confused.
hoodrichsucka- i wuld pick a better name. but if u insist on that one then don't paint yet. sketch more. for throws try to start a letter at one point and try to draw the letter with one line. and the style that u put into the first letter shuld be in the rest of ur letters.on that throw the A don't look like an A. the S is way to far away from the L. and the C is too small. and the C is a generic regualr C but the other letters have wiggles. so like I said earlier the first letter defines the style u need to put on the rest.
your actual design isn't getting better at all, you need to sketch much more on paper. however, i think the can control has definitely improved since last time, you've got much cleaner lines on the outline. the fill needs work, get some fat caps or summat.
Callz - Ugh.. work on letter consistancy. all your letters as squished up and then the Z stands out most of all. and the Z is mad ugly. and the fill job is completely out of the C. Didn't you learn how to color in the lines? Why is your tag "calls" when you pianted "callZ"? the Z just makes it pretty gay. sketch sketch sketch, then paint it on that piece of wood.
Bump because I'm gay and feel that I didn't get enough critisism on my third piece I've ever done. Oh, and I write Wrekone and Atmos, so you don't get too confused. [/b][/quote] its good. i like the AT throwie and the piece itself is pretty good but the M it comes together at the points. open it up more. same with the A a bit. other than that its nice. i like the colors
ok cool, thanks man. im still workin on it all, but i use spraypaint to get used to it u know. thanks
haha oh shit your right, Its the shape of a Z, but it's still considered an S. haha my bad. but still, he should deffinatly work on those other things.