ye i photoshop'ed one my chara's.. lol -__- shure recon Pm me something u need a crit on..so i dont whore up this thread.
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i shalt not be superized if this one doesnt get eatin alive by something better......(still very rough draft) crits.....and should i fill....? [Broken External Image]:http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/6480/scan005may1620068mz.jpg
fuck the cat6, sat9, standardized testing, w/e u wanna call it bored as heckkkk // crits ? its all pencil
runci? [/b][/quote] bump because nobody commented because of the talkin' <_< lust,what do you think? i ask you because your shit is always very nice!
really likin it SAWZR, but my crit is the Z makes me think of a C or E without knowing its a Z prior to seeing it. Im liking how the S and Z are smaller than the A and W, brings in the eyes towards the whole peice's center. (second peice) The main problem I have with the peice is the first leg of the W seems a bit open and bare, like there arent other extensions from other letters near it or over lapping, sort of throws off the peice in a bit, also I dont like how the third leg of the W underlaps and is short because of the AG, maybe throw the leg under the AG and out the topright of it. All the letters have those small add extensions in the middle of the letters, but the S has it at the bottom, doenst seem too uniform...im just looking for crits too hah. Dont have the time to say all the things I like in detail. just my 99 cents
i like these lil simples they seemt o be goin into the right direction. and yes they do kinda remind me of runci's work, seem to be following a good concept of "SIMPLE" most people dont understand what a simple is. . i think you should keep going in the direction that ur going. cause i actually like some the work coming frum u man
haha nice sawzr, ur style, kinda reminds of Gesus with tht green shit in ur second one and also of runci overall, but its all gudd. peace. btw, i jus added sum shit to my previous sketch, chek it, i kno its still toy but yah, som progress i hope, [Broken External Image]:http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/3919/img28713kx.jpg
Sketched it with pen and coloured with computer. The M is too big and the thing in the middle of the U turned out horrible. But any serious crits please? and be seriously harsh, only way ill learn
added the letters "ine" to complete the word "Yasmine" at the bottom. [Broken External Image]:http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/2497/img28808ko.jpg
it has potential, but i think it has 'too muchgoing on', cant make much out of it. Hurts my eyes lol.