lovely beef. dooooodle.. this is what happens when tehy try to make me do maths: [Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlewithfishcity3d.jpg
wot? ur gonna bump ur own shit and not comment on mine? tutututut we dont like that.... fat boy! er.... stop with all the overlappings of the letters. stop with the extensions like the top and bottom of the K. go as simple as u possibly can. cos it doesnt look very gd im afraid and thats because ur letters have no basic foundation. as every1 says, do simple simple letters for a while at least m8..... and outline thinnner and giv it a 3d. i rekon.
i think its main prob is that the black lines are all ... unstraight.. like they wiggly... like u cant draw a straight line...... plan it out in pencil first... apart from that it dont look too bad. wots it say? jedi? jedt?
it sais jedt and im not gunna use black for outline next time im gunna just fade the outline in to the couler
Janks Is Nice.. Yeah I 'Doooooodle' During Maths Class Too Lol.. Smer - Its Nice.. I Like Your Style..
[Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/kopt.jpg needs works but was a doodle for a new tag im thinking of
[Broken External Image]:http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/8227/throwies2ms.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8009/piece0gp.th.jpg crits and/or feedback please.
again another time where someone has asked for critz and gave any on the above even though i never asked for it i still expect it ! ps the piece in blue has some but not alot of letter structure work with it
someone's style im tryin needs a lotta work still [Broken External Image]:http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo.jpg crits so far...